Wow Alice, it looks really cool on the beach. I'm not alltogether sure that you looked excited but I guess you must have been to be at the beach.Nice job Alice.
Hi I love how you made the mermaid say help.I can tell he needs to get out of the sand. You could have put more speech bubbles.
Quietly excited I think!
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Wow Alice, it looks really cool on the beach. I'm not alltogether sure that you looked excited but I guess you must have been to be at the beach.Nice job Alice.
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ReplyDeleteI love how you made the mermaid say help.
I can tell he needs to get out of the sand.
You could have put more speech bubbles.
Quietly excited I think!
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