Wednesday, 20 March 2013

Rose's Piha Poem

Piha poem
Sun bearing
Waves curling
Sunblock slapping

We’re having fun
Enjoying the sun  
The waves sound like dogs lapping

Learning about a rip
Makes my heart skip
Sandcastles taking place

I love camp
It is so champ
Running into the water like a giant race

Restless in my sleeping bag
I feel like a rag
Learning about the sun

Rain does not come
My biscuit is yum
I don’t want to go, Piha is so fun!    


  1. Kiri (Rose's Mum)20 March 2013 at 19:52

    Sounds like you had a great time. Your lovely descriptive words tell me a lot about your day.

  2. When you said that "I love camp, Its so champ" it was really creative

    1. Thank you
      It was champ and I had a good time writing that.

  3. Carol, Rog & Ollie26 March 2013 at 13:19

    Rose, you made me laugh with all the excellent rhyming! Keep it up!