Showing posts with label poetic writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poetic writing. Show all posts
Wednesday, 19 June 2013
Monday, 17 June 2013
Sunday, 16 June 2013
Wednesday, 12 June 2013
Jasmine's Camp Poem
Camp Poem
Another fun day was rising,
As other people were realizing,
That today was the day for the beach!
We all hopped into the bus,
Without any fuss,
Though the top of
the bus was out of reach.
Morning tea is very close
And all my food is very gross.
The black sand is steaming hot.
Learning how to recognize a rip
makes me want to bite my lip.
Thinking about this
Makes me want
to trot.
Lunch is super near
I smell the fear
For me to eat!
Ran down the glittery sand
slipping off my hand,
Beating my feet on the ground
with the best beat!
By Jasmine
Sunday, 9 June 2013
Alice's Summer Poem
Summer Poem
Summer smells like the strong salty sea water travelling up my nose when I walk across the beach. I can smell fish and chips as families picnic on the beach at sunset.
Summer sounds like waves crashing onto the wet slippery rocks. I can hear seagulls squawking as they circle over my head, looking for their next meal.
Summer tastes like delicious chocolate ice-cream melting in my mouth. I can taste the salty sea water swirling in my mouth after I get dunked by a wave.
Summer looks like the sun beaming on the deep blue shimmering sea. I can see people sunbathing in the burning hot sun. People are splashing in the shallow blue sea. I love watching seagulls flying high in the bright blue sky.
Summer feels like the soft, silky, hot sand on the bottom of my feet. I can feel the sharp shells pinching my feet. I can feel the freezing cold sea splashing on my body.
By Alice
Thursday, 18 April 2013
Georgia's Haiku's
Seasons Haiku
Winter's coming soon
I can’t wait - it will be fun
It’s cold, stay inside!
Nature Haiku
In the bush I
Look for birds flying
Ah! A long walk.
Funny Haiku
I saw a hungry
Ant. It had eaten up
A house down the street!
By Georgia
Tuesday, 16 April 2013
Haiku
Seasons Haiku
Winter is so cold
I make angels out of snow
I do love winter
Funny Haiku
My best friend is nice.
I will play with her today.
I hate my best friend.
Nature Haiku
Nature is awesome.
Nature is part of the earth.
Nature is perfect
By EJ
Down By the Bay Artwork
Down By The Bay
Down By the bay
Where the watermelons grow
Back to my home
I dare not go
For if I do
My mother will say
"Did you ever see a lion kissing a python?"
Down by the bay.
By Jaimie
My Haiku Poem
Horses galloping
They look really beautiful
I want to ride one
By Alice
Down by the Bay
We listened to the song "Down By the Bay" by Raffi. We then wrote our own versions that included nonsense rhymes. Then we created art to show our verse of the song.
First we got our Thinking Skills book and drew a picture of an animal doing something silly that rhymed. Then we got a big piece of white paper and drew our pictures in white chalk. Then we coloured our pictures of our animals in using crayons, leaving the white chalk uncoloured.Then we dyed it with black dye. The dye turned our white chalk lines black.
This is my picture:
Down by the bay
Where the watermelons grow
Back to my home
I dare not go.
For if I do
My mother will say
"Have you ever seen a hog
Kissing a log?"
Down by the bay.
By Fisher
Summer
Summer
Summer smells like the salty waves splashing onto the sand. I can smell sunblock stench rubbing off.
Summer sounds like kids playing in the hot sun. I can hear the sea foaming onto the sand.
Summer tastes like ice cream melting in my cone. I can taste an ice block melting in my mouth.
Summer looks like sandcastles washing away. I can see seagulls so high it sky with the blinding sun. I can see kids playing with a beach ball.
By Lara
Haiku
Seasons
The snow is melting.
The flowers are all blooming.
Spring is coming, yay!
Nature
The wind is blowing.
It had blown over the trees.
It is cool outside.
By: Maggie
Haiku
Seasons
Autumn is coming
Time to explore in the leaves
Aghhh! Here comes winter
Nature
Korus are growing
Waterfalls are being made
Here comes the water
Funny
Dancing in the class
Looking like a maniac
Did the splits oh no!
By Axel
Jasmine's Senses Poem
Summer Senses
Summer smells like the mouth-watering scent of sausages being grilled on a steaming barbecue. As I ride past the windy beach, I can smell the salty sea foaming onto the wet sand. I love the delicious smell of Fish n Chips being cooked by my mum.
Summer sounds like the beautiful birds singing loud and clear like the cow's bells ringing. I can hear little kids singing with the birds. I like to hear pop music from my stereo.
Summer tastes like the cold vanilla Ice cream melting in my mouth. I can taste the juicy steak fresh of the barbecue. I like to taste the freshly caught, salty Fish 'n Chips.
Summer looks like a green healthy environment near the beach. I can see the sun shining brightly on the cold, heavy waves pushing me onto shore, As I walk along the golden sand, I love to see the colourful sea shells scattered on the shore.
Summer feels like the soft sand sliding off my hand like silk. I like to feel the cold water sticking to my body. I enjoy feeling the cold big waves pushing me to shore.
By: Jasmine
Thursday, 11 April 2013
Michael's Haiku Poems
Nature Haiku
Jaguar sprinting
Jaguar jumps through the air
Flies and land in leaves.
Seasons Haiku
The hot sun burns me,
It hurts my small weak body
I put on sunscreen
Silly Haiku
I go to school late
Little miss broke my lunch box
I'm glad she did it.
Wednesday, 10 April 2013
Nonsense Poem
Nonsense Poem
I entered Ben’s house with the door closed
We watched the TV on a blank screen
It was a sunny day when it was time to go to sleep
There was no sound while Ben was snoring
I woke up in a dream
I drove a car on a stream
It was time for trick or treat on Christmas day
Many people came to our house but we scared them instead
The next day we ate breakfast without opening our mouths
By Yuan
Monday, 8 April 2013
Wednesday, 3 April 2013
Nick's Awesome Camp Poem
Camp poem
We are about to get going
And we will be flowing
It will always be a sunny day.
We're on the bus ready to go
I will never say no
We're having fun at piha bay.
Here we go off to piha
And I am going to say yeeha
I think this going to be fun.
Learning facts about the ocean
I'm having fun watching henry posing
It's so much fun being in the sun.
We're nearly done at this wonderful place
And it truly has put a smile on our face
The bus is coming pretty soon
It's been the best day ever
Jumping off lion rock I will do never.
I liked looking at the sand dunes.
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