What an interesting personification Rose. I think of the sun differently now. I can really visualise her "red flaming hair". I would love to see you draw a picture to represent this.....
Hi RoseI love your poem, especially the part 'I swoop my red flaming hair'. It also reminds me of you when you dance and fling your hair around!
I love your poem. I like your describing words and how you said I try to stop Mr Snow. It made me laugh.
i love it so much so nice it's so good rose.
What an interesting personification Rose. I think of the sun differently now. I can really visualise her "red flaming hair". I would love to see you draw a picture to represent this.....
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ReplyDeleteI love your poem, especially the part 'I swoop my red flaming hair'. It also reminds me of you when you dance and fling your hair around!
I love your poem.
ReplyDeleteI like your describing words and how you said I try to stop Mr Snow.
It made me laugh.
i love it so much so nice it's so good rose.
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