Thursday, 18 April 2013

Georgia's Haiku's

Seasons Haiku

Winter's coming soon
I can’t wait - it will be fun
It’s cold, stay inside!

Nature Haiku

In the bush I
Look for birds flying
Ah! A long walk.

Funny Haiku

I saw a hungry
Ant. It had eaten up
A house down the street!

By Georgia

1 comment:

  1. Hi Georgia,
    I really like your Haiku poems, but the first poem is the only one with the right number of syllables. What could you add in to make the second two poems have the 5,7,5 syllables that Haiku poems need?

    You could do something like:

    In the forest I
    Always look for birds flying
    Ah! A nice, long walk


    I saw a very
    Hungry ant it had eaten
    A house down the street

    What do you think?

    Have a great holiday :D
    Miss Williams